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The Babysitter
Six-year-old Tommy swears a man visits his closet every night. His 17-year-old babysitter Jess assumes it's just a kid's imagination — until she starts hearing footsteps inside the walls. A 20-chapter YA mystery about the secrets families keep, and the courage it takes to open the closet door.
Chapter 10 — The Name
The sixth Friday, it rained.
Jess arrived to find the house dimmer than usual, lamps on against the gray afternoon bleeding through the windows, the whole place feeling like it was holding its breath. Sarah answered the door looking pale, dark circles under her eyes, and for a moment Jess thought she might cancel — might say *not tonight, we’re not up for it* — but then Tommy barreled down the stairs at full speed and the evening began the way evenings did, the machinery of normalcy grinding forward.
Except everything felt heavier. At dinner, Sarah barely spoke, pushing pasta around her plate into neat uneaten rows. Mark kept checking his phone, frowning at whatever he saw, then forcing a smile for Tommy that dissolved the second Tommy looked away. When they left — a charity thing, Mark said, vague — Sarah hugged Tommy a little too long at the door, her face buried in his hair.
“Be good,” she whispered. “Be good for Jess.”
“I’m always good,” Tommy said, muffled.
“I know, baby. I know.”
The door closed. The deadbolt turned. And Jess stood in the foyer with a six-year-old and the distinct, unshakable feeling that she was babysitting inside a house that was afraid of something.
Tommy’s bedtime routine took longer than usual. He was restless, tossing under the covers, asking for water twice, complaining the night-light was too bright and then, when she dimmed it, too dim. Jess sat on the edge of his bed and read two full chapters of the dragon book, doing all the voices, until finally — finally — his breathing slowed and his grip on the stegosaurus loosened.
She was easing off the bed, moving on silent sock feet toward the door, when he spoke.
Not awake. Not really. His voice was thick and slurred with sleep, the words swimming up from wherever dreams live.
“Uncle Ray…”
Jess froze mid-step, one foot hovering above the carpet.
“…shhh,” Tommy murmured, turning his face deeper into the pillow. “Uncle Ray says… quiet… s’okay…”
Her blood went cold. She stood perfectly still in the dark bedroom, not daring to breathe, while Tommy’s small chest rose and fell, rose and fell, and the rain ticked against the windowpane like fingernails.
*Uncle Ray.*
A name. After weeks of “the man” — weeks of drawings and footsteps and cut photographs and deflections — a name, spoken in the dark like a secret Tommy didn’t know he was telling. A name with weight, with history, with a face in a torn photograph.
Jess backed out of the room on silent feet and eased the door to its regulation crack. She leaned against the hallway wall, her phone clutched in her hand, and stared at the closet door standing open its exact three inches, the night-light’s amber glow pooling on the carpet in front of it.
*Uncle Ray.*
The brother in the photograph. It had to be. The young man with Sarah’s eyes and Sarah’s crooked smile, cut out of the family picture, his name scratched off the back with enough force to tear the paper. Sarah’s brother. Tommy’s uncle.
An uncle who “isn’t part of our lives anymore.”
An uncle a six-year-old whispered to in his sleep — whispered *shhh*, the way you shush someone who’s really there, someone standing close enough to hear.
Downstairs, Jess sat in the dark living room long after Tommy’s breathing had settled into the deep rhythms of true sleep, the rain on the windows the only sound, and she did the thing she’d been avoiding for weeks: she let the pieces touch.
A man in the wall — footsteps, a breath, caught on her phone. A brother cut out of a photo — his half in her desk drawer at home. A mother who went white at the sight of her babysitter near a closet. A father who warned her, voice dropped low, not to ask questions.
And now, a name.
*Uncle Ray.*
Jess pulled out her phone. She opened the voice memo and listened one more time, there in the dark, with the rain on the windows and a sleeping child upstairs dreaming of his uncle. Three footsteps. A breath.
She didn’t know who Uncle Ray was. She didn’t know where he was, or why Sarah had cut him out of her life with scissors, or what he wanted with a little boy’s closet, or why a grown man would need a six-year-old to keep his secrets.
She thought about the recording again — the footsteps, the breath. She thought about the gap in the baseboard, the dark line running the length of Tommy’s bedroom wall. She thought about Mark’s voice dropping half an octave in the foyer: *the worst thing you can do is ask him questions that make the nightmares feel real.*
What if they weren’t nightmares?
Jess stood up and went to the window. The rain had stopped. The street was empty and glistening, the Callahans’ house two blocks over dark except for one upstairs window — Tommy’s, the night-light’s amber glow just visible through the curtains.
Somewhere in that house, a little boy was dreaming about his uncle. Somewhere in that house, behind a wall or inside one, something had left three footsteps on her phone.
And Jess — Jess was done pretending she didn’t hear the walls breathing. Done letting Mark’s warnings and Sarah’s brittle smiles steer her away from the questions. Next Friday, she would start getting answers.
But she knew one thing already, with a certainty that settled into her bones like the cold coming off the rain-streaked glass:
Tommy had never been imagining anything at all — and whatever Uncle Ray was, Jess was going to find out.